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Jordan Acosta
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Speculative mystery writer based near London. jordanacosta.co
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It’s taken nearly a week of lunchtimes and evenings to surgically insert new dialogue and a new end to this chapter for Draft 3 edits. Quite enjoyed the alliteration in this line. Onwards to taking a whole chapter out and writing a brand new chapter in. #amwriting#writingcommunity

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“Behind us, I could hear the jubilant gudfolk fall silent in disbelief as smoke and fire billowed freely from the temple’s stone openings. The curtain of smog smothered the main square in a sulphuric shroud, pierced only by the pale disc of the sun.”
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Jordan Acosta
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Speculative mystery writer based near London. jordanacosta.co
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