dynamic creature; beautiful child w/ a coat of many colors
in one sense, not what I meant at all; in another, equally important sense, exactly what I meant .
canada dry. not my favorite, but it’s what we had in the fridge.
mamba mentality. not everybody understands.
I think it sounds perfectly imperfect as-is, but I realize this advice is a bit of an annoying non-answer. If I were writing, I would just delete the line entirely and let the poem lapse into silence, but that’s a method that’s particular to my own goals so idk . wonderful poem btw
mouthfeel
The ideal subject of totalitarian rule is someone who distrusts uncertainty and demands absolutes.
one thing about me, I’m always gonna “make it crazy” for just eleven dollars
but teal, not auspicious. overall an ambivalent omen.