"butterflies don't have teeth but these ones do" is a really good line, especially with the first paragraph's set up!
transformers one mentioned!! just saw it this monday. people werent kidding, it really was a great watch even if i dont keep up with the franchise. havent seen tmnt:mm yet, but the designs look pretty great! the turts usually look super similar, but you can really tell them apart in there
oh, i recognise psycho pass!! havent seen it yet but heard lots of good things. that sounds so promising! i saw you got a manga going, ill go check that out soon :))
music's really nice :)) i usually get something playing in the background between writing sessions. bit distracting, honestly, but we can treat ourselves sometimes!! ill check that out next time im in a long car ride. last musical i listened to was hadestown, the singers there were so good
aw, thats sweet! i think your stuff does look like itd be something a small kid would like. its nice to hear its made thoughtfully too :))
if someone i already know happens to be, i sometimes bring it up and ask if it checks out! otherwise, not really. i just try to keep things consistent and feel like they make sense with the world. imo, thats all you really need unless youre specifically going for being as realistic as you can be!!
no probs!! and ohh, good luck, go get those words in :))
right? thats one of the extra fun kinds of dialogue, for sure!!
setting descriptions 👀 i like doing those too, helps set a mood. super easy to get carried away w/ too many descs though hahaha, but youre right! just needs extra practice