KD
Kathryn DeZur
@kdezur.bsky.social
Creative nonfiction appearing in Dorothy Parker’s Ashes, Nassau Review, and Still-Points Quarterly; developmental and copy editing of psychology/self-help and memoir. Mornings include meditation and a latte, but not in that order.
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Editing advice: act like a toddler. Why? Why? WHY? Why is there a random scene with a dog? To establish the protagonist’s soft side. Why? Because she comes across as iron-hearted. Why? Because I don’t reveal how she feels in most scenes. Aha. Take out the random dog and give that woman feelings.
KD
Kathryn DeZur
@kdezur.bsky.social
Creative nonfiction appearing in Dorothy Parker’s Ashes, Nassau Review, and Still-Points Quarterly; developmental and copy editing of psychology/self-help and memoir. Mornings include meditation and a latte, but not in that order.
29 followers17 following21 posts