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Steve Lieber
@stevelieberart.bsky.social
Comics artist at DC, Image, Marvel, Dark Horse, Oni. Metamorpho, Backflash, Superman’s Pal Jimmy Olsen, Superior Foes, Whiteout, Underground, One-Star Squadron & more. linktr.ee/stevelieber
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I feel bad for not being at #RCCC this year to look at emerging artists’ portfolios- something I’m committed to doing at every con. If I had been there, here’s what I probably would have told you.

YOUR PORTFOLIO CRITIQUE
THINGS I'D PROBABLY TELL YOU IF I WERE LOOKING AT YOUR WORK IN PERSON
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Violating the 180 degree rule makes this sequence hard to follow
2. A few more incidental overlaps will make this foreshortening a lot clearer
3. Symmetrical compositions with a character dead center imply an important moment. Maybe don't draw every panel like that?
4. This (whatever looks kind of fake. Take the time to look at reference instead of just making it up
5. An establishing shot would help the reader understand
Where this takes place.
6. Find some life-drawing sessions to attend, or practice from photos online.
7. Show these pages to someone who doesn't know the story and ask them to tell the story back to you.
8. Nudge this part over a bit to eliminate that tangency.
9.
You've flattened out the depth by rendering the foreground, middle ground, & background with the same values. You can create depth and direct the eye by organizing them into overlapping planes of light & dark
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PCkiernangeary.art

about to make this my desktop wallpaper, super helpful reminder

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Abraket.bsky.social

the last point probably mostly applies to things from the american comics background, due to the fact that "plot" is heavily conveyed through text in those, in general, as opposed to the panel layout and their graphic contents as they are in some other "traditions"

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TMteresasm.bsky.social

📌

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RLripleylacross.bsky.social

Is this posted on Tumblr anywhere? I'd love to share it there.

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NBnigel63.bsky.social

Ah yes, "room for lettering" - more than a kern'el of truth, there! 🤔 (🤭)

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I find making my own dummies definitely helps me think about the text even more, since I’m doing all of the initial design.

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Ebabblingfringe.bsky.social

📌

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Tboobachu.bsky.social

Prolly my biggest pet peeve... also why is bluesky ated images forever dang

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I’ll bet Gerhard never listened to #10

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DWdavidwynne.bsky.social

I had a portfolio critique from Shelly Bond once (the only pro critique I’ve ever had), and some of this came up, but her main advice was “you’re good at drawing apes, people like apes, draw my apes” In retrospect, I should have taken that advice

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Steve Lieber
@stevelieberart.bsky.social
Comics artist at DC, Image, Marvel, Dark Horse, Oni. Metamorpho, Backflash, Superman’s Pal Jimmy Olsen, Superior Foes, Whiteout, Underground, One-Star Squadron & more. linktr.ee/stevelieber
8.2k followers1.1k following2k posts