That one’s not out yet. But fair point

It’s invaluable, really. Always makes my stuff better. Maybe seek out a writer and offer to swap? You beta them, and they return the favor?

I remember Triumph, too. Fittingly, he even died by accident

I'm not really in a position to give much by way of advice, but all I will say is keep trying and get beta readers you trust to be honest. If that helps at all.

I believe it's on Max now.

Not that I know of, but let me know if you run across one?

damn.... this makes me very sad.

Happy to help with that however I can

Well, that's enough to get me to stop seeing Zach Levi's movies.

I have personally dealt with that so-called Shaman. He's an idiot.