I reread the comic to get a feel for what I need to change (or add). I'm not as dissatisfied with it as I thought I was. Besides fixing faces (there are so many to fix..), my main gripe is dialogue. I thought I'd be more bugged by the pacing, but no, not really.

The last time I read it I felt like things were happening and scenes were changing too quickly, but I didn't get that impression this time? The thing that bugs me the most is still how Jacky is caught. It doesn't suit her personality. I want time to fix it!! But I'm forever backlogged on comms.