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Heather E. Saunders
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The company's maiden spaceflight --> The company's first / proving / inaugural / initial spaceflight SO many other options available. #AmEditing#InclusiveLanguage#ConsciousLanguage#GenderNeutralLanguage#NovaArcContent
That's one I would have missed. In fact, the only issue I'd have had with it is "maiden spaceflight" vs "maiden voyage". The intent of "maiden" is clearly to mean "first" here, but there are ways to use neutral language instead, as you showed. Solid tip. Thanks!
Yeah you don't call its last mission its crone spaceflight.
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Heather E. Saunders
@h-e-saunders.bsky.social
🧡 That space-loving, orange-haired editor 🌟Here for edibuddies, space stuff, doggos, sustainability, inclusion & kindness🔸she/they/Mx
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