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CHOAM Nomsky (frightening)
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Sam Thielman | Seen NYT Book Review, New Yorker, Slate, Atlantic, Flaming Hydra foreverwars.ghost.io | he/him | 741.5 (Comic books, strips, etc.) | NC>Brooklyn | Husband, father, catherd | I issue, sir, not from the egg but from the acorn
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Dammit.Dammit.
pfft maybe, but i prefer the Gravity's Rainbow "shoot the moon" approach
It is beyond doubt that a text filled with extraneous verbiage, such as sub-clauses, unnecessary and superfluous adjectives, lists, inventories and/or repetition, can be rendered superior by the application of judicious excisions, since this will lead to a more concise and compelling communication.
Cuts will continue until the writing improves
CN
CHOAM Nomsky (frightening)
@thielman.bsky.social
Sam Thielman | Seen NYT Book Review, New Yorker, Slate, Atlantic, Flaming Hydra foreverwars.ghost.io | he/him | 741.5 (Comic books, strips, etc.) | NC>Brooklyn | Husband, father, catherd | I issue, sir, not from the egg but from the acorn
18.5k followers1k following17.1k posts